The graph below shows the cosumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in European countru 1979 and 2004
The provided line graph depicts the
consumption
of fish, beef
, lamb, and chicken
in Europe from 1979 to 2004. They measured the value in grams per person per week. In general, there was a downward trend
for lamb and beef
during the period, while
chicken
tended to gradually increase, and fish did not denote any significant alteration.
Looking more in detail, there was a trend
of chicken
showing an upward trend
as it started as
the third position in 1979 and Change preposition
in
then
arose
up, which placed it in second Correct your spelling
rose
place
in 1984. Furthermore
, from 1989 to 1994, beef
was replaced as the first place
of consumption
until 2004. On the other hand
, chicken
, which had a
first Correct article usage
apply
place
in 1979, started to jump down in 1989, eventually still in the
second Correct article usage
apply
place
of
Change preposition
in
consumption
.
Similar to beef
, lamb had a decline
Change the verb form
declining
trend
starting
. Verb problem
apply
Firstly
, meat was placed in the second position for food consumption
. However
, range
from 1979 to 1984 started being replaced with Correct article usage
the range
chicken
and drop
slightly until 2004 as the third Wrong verb form
dropped
place
of most food consumed by public
. Add an article
the public
However
, fish, which were in the least
position, fluctuated slowly with Correct word choice
lowest
sharp
movement from 1979 to 2004.Correct article usage
a sharp
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, beef, chicken, trend, place with synonyms.
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