The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal berween 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal berween 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
line
graph illustrates the average Carbon dioxide emissions by an individual person in various European countries for about 40 years time
period
.
Overall
,the UK and
Sweden
graphs are downtrend,
while
Italy and Portugal graphs are uptrend. In 1967,the United Kingdom was the highest CO2 emission country at almost 11 metric
tonnes
and
Sweden
was the second highest on the list at around 9 metric
tonnes
,which was double that of Italy(over 4 metric
tonnes
) and fourth times bigger than Portugal.The UK carbon emission decreased gradually and ended up at nearly 9 metric
tonnes
.
Sweden
's graph decreased dramatically and closed under 6 metric
tonnes
.
By contrast
,Italy's trend
line
increased steadily over the
period
of time and finished at almost 8 metric
tonnes
,which was nearly double than starting point.
Moreover
,Italy finished the
period
in the second
period
.Portugal started the journey with the lowest point among the countries,but gradually increased
line
ended the journey near about 6 metric
tonnes
along with
Sweden
's
line
.
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