The chart below shows the changes in the average price in the UK from 1998 to 2018

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The chart illustrates the average price changes in the

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from 1988 to 2018.

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, from the

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it is evident that throughout the years

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the UK

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has experienced

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a substancial

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substancial

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substantial

increase in the

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prices

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price

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range. In 1979,

prices

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for fresh fruits and vegetables

costed

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cost

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only around 55 GBP. From the

chart

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we see that

price

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prices

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steep

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trajectory from 1989 to 2009 and it is the most expensive food item compared to sugar

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sweets and other carbonated drinks. Carbonated drinks

prices

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stayed constant from 1983 to 1985 which

costed

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cost

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100 GBP.

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prices

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price

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ranges

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increased from 1985 to 2009 despite it being the least expensive food item right now in the

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this

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graphs

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depicts a visual representation of the price ranges

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the UK

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has experienced over the past years.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, prices with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

130 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Average price
Fluctuations
Significant increase/decrease
Stability
Inflation rate
Economic recession
Taxation
Consumer impact
Trend analysis
Sector-specific trends
Peak
Trough
Price index
Consumer Price Index (CPI)
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The chart below shows the changes in the average price in the UK from 1998 to 2018

Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

With the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on environment? What can be done to solve the problem?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what are the possible problems and solutions?

Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for lesuire activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?