Many opinions may say that beauty and property will lead to a successful life.
However
, it is the writer's
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that
hardworkingCorrect word choice
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and determination are the initial factors of
success
.
It should be considered that
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and effort have a profound impact on one's
success
.
This
is a long road to go, so tolerance or
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is needed in everyone's
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. By being tolerated,
people
can develop
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of
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during their work and
also
improve their aim for
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.
As a result
, those
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will help them to strengthen
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determination to
and
also
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for their own qualities. Taking a
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as an example,
although
he had only a little
money
, he found his own cafe brand and developed it into
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international brand
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his ambition and effort.
It is true when the toehold of
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successful life is the capital and a good
appearance
.
Money
can assist
people
a lot in solving and
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their careers, especially young
people
who are new founders.
Moreover
,
appearance
can help
people
to have
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experience in meeting with counterparties or
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money
for their startup.
For example
, to be successful in entertainment jobs,
such
as actors or singers,
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a friendly
appearance
and properties.
From the writer's point of view, studious is much more
than the
appearance
although
both aspects have positive effects
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our
success
.
However
, beauty and
money
are not
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for their career
while
having
attemptCorrect article usage
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can
the
slowly.
Furthermore
,
this
character can help
people
to
experience in their work that can
also
provide them in
othersCorrect quantifier usage
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fields.
In conclusion, indeed working hard can secure a bright future for most of us as an ordinary, but there are some other factors that could
also
lead to
success
such
as great fortune and
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appearance
.