Any attempt to preserve the natural world will hinder economic development. However, the benefits of helping the environment will always far outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?
The merits of protecting
natural
environment Correct article usage
the natural
boosts
industries which definitely Change the verb form
boost
values
more than Correct subject-verb agreement
value
its
demerits. Correct pronoun usage
their
Although
, there is an opposition who thinks vice versa. I absolutely agree with the first mindset.
Correct word choice
However
While
there are some arguments in favor
of blocking the financial systems by environmental Change the spelling
favour
protecting
acts, it is worth considering the potential harms Replace the word
protection
such
actions could impose on essential services and everyday people's life. For example
, increasing the cost of energy in order to minimize its consumption, can put pressur
on low-income families to do their fundamental daily activities Correct your spelling
pressure
such
as keeping their home temperature at a
appropriate level. Change the article
an
However
, a strong sustainable environmental managing approach, not only can eliminate this
Correct determiner usage
the
life threatening
and worrying side effects of Add a hyphen
life-threatening
eccofriendly
Correct your spelling
eco-friendly
ecofriendly
policie
Correct your spelling
policies
police
policy
,
but has its own benefits which are worth time, money and any Remove the comma
apply
efforts
Fix the agreement mistake
effort
spending
on their Wrong verb form
spent
developments
.
On the other side,the existence of absolute positive impacts of environmentally friendly practices on industry is undeniably true. Fix the agreement mistake
development
This
means that by taking any protective measures to prevent pollution and contaminating the natural resources, we are in fact save
the cash cows which are the moving power for any industrial field. Water reservoirs Wrong verb form
saving
is
revealed to give an example, which can be used as Change the verb form
are
renewable
source of energy to produce electricity. Add an article
a renewable
Additionally
can be supplied as drinkable water. Moreover
, by less consuming
of these resources Replace the word
consumption
such
as water, oil, and other resources we can save the natural capital of
being wasted on importing them and later Change preposition
apply
this
saved cashflow
which can be invested Correct your spelling
cash flow
on
Change preposition
in
other segment
of Change the wording
another segment
other segments
economy
including ecotourism, which is one of the most proven political plans to foster the national and global economies.
In Add an article
the economy
coclusion
, Correct your spelling
conclusion
by
detecting and running supportive Change preposition
apply
economical
programs, performing and investing Correct word choice
economic
on
Change preposition
in
protectional
activities on nature and raw materialsCorrect your spelling
protection
,
can Remove the comma
apply
finally
strengthen the manetary
systems Correct your spelling
monetary
in addition
to maintain
the planet safe and clean for its present and future inhabitants.Change the verb form
maintaining
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