Task 1: The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to four countries from 1990 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at a line graph provided reveals the exported proportion from Australia to four nations namely
Japan
, The US, China and India counted by percent, from 1990 to 2012. Overall
there is a recessive growth pattern witnessed by those of Japan
and the US, which observed a negative relation compared to the two other ones.
In terms of Japan
's imported number which is the highest figure at the
initial with about 25 which is Correct article usage
apply
also
its peak, followed by the vigorous deterioration to around 18 at
2005 before experiencing a marginal fluctuation Change preposition
in
at
the next few years and ending with approximately 19 at 2012.
As for those of the US, launching at more than 10 Change preposition
in
at
2005, the data experienced a slowly erratic trend in the next 10 years before Change preposition
in
slided
away to in the vicinity of 5 Correct your spelling
sliding
at
2012.
Regarding the imported breakdown of China and India, Change preposition
in
although
they had a comparatively homogeneous starting point at around 2, they still had a difference in levels of growth. While
there was a dramatic acceleration witnessed by the former to nearly 30, which not only reached its peak but also
took over Japan
's leading position, the latter experienced unswerving constancy until 2000 before hiking to approximately 5 at the year
end.Change noun form
year's
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