You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear innocent, I am writing to express my
interst
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interest
to do
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in doing
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work
in our company's
headquarter
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headquarters
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for six months in
USA
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the USA
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. I recently heard that someone
leave
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left
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the job for six months on
temporary
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a temporary
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basis. Meanwhile, I thought that would be a great opportunity for me
enhance
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my skills and learn to manage the
work load
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. As you know,
i
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have been promoted Alternate production manager post and
i
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I
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am very passionate and
hard working
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toward my
work
. So, I will communicate with my
collegue
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colleague
colleagues
on
team
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app. Through
this
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they would be
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anything related to
work
. I have talked to
amy
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Amy
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to manage all the
work
after me. I have already told her everything about
work
and their
ducumentions
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documentation
. She can handle the workload easily.
Furthermore
, I will check my emails on
daily
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basis and I will keep in
her
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apply
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touch and be available
in
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for
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emergeny
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emergency
phone calls. Once I
will
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get back to the office, I will catch up the all pending
work
by
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overtime.
Finally
, I need your support for approval So, that
i
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I
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can do
work
for six months in our company's head office and get more
enlightment
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enlightenment
of
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about
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the
work
. I look forward to your positive reply. Your
sincerly
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sincerely
, Sarbjeet Singh
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Tone
Ensure your letter has a more professional tone and is free of informal expressions. Maintain a balance between being formal and approachable.
Grammar & Spelling
Proofread your letter for spelling and grammar mistakes. Correcting these mistakes can significantly improve the professionalism and clarity of your letter.
Structure
Consider adding more structure to your letter by having clear paragraph separations that each cover a distinct topic: your request, how your work will be managed, and closing with a call to action.
Consistency
Maintain consistency in tense usage throughout the letter to improve readability and coherence.
Flow
Use transitions and linking phrases to connect ideas more seamlessly and enhance the flow of your letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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