You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear innocent,
I am writing to express my
interst
Correct your spelling
interest
to do
Change preposition
in doing
work
in our company's headquarter
for six months in Correct subject-verb agreement
headquarters
USA
. I recently heard that someone Correct article usage
the USA
leave
the job for six months on Wrong verb form
left
temporary
basis. Meanwhile, I thought that would be a great opportunity for me Add an article
a temporary
enhance
my skills and learn to manage the Fix the infinitive
to enhance
work load
.
As you know, Correct your spelling
workload
i
have been promoted Alternate production manager post and Change the capitalization
I
i
am very passionate and Change the capitalization
I
hard working
toward my Add a hyphen
hard-working
work
. So, I will communicate with my collegue
on Correct your spelling
colleague
colleagues
team
app. Through Correct article usage
the team
this
they would be Add a comma
this,
ask
anything related to Wrong verb form
asked
work
.
I have talked to amy
to manage all the Change the capitalization
Amy
work
after me. I have already told her everything about work
and their ducumentions
. She can handle the workload easily. Correct your spelling
documentation
Furthermore
, I will check my emails on daily
basis and I will keep in Correct article usage
a daily
her
touch and be available Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
Change preposition
for
emergeny
phone calls. Once I Correct your spelling
emergency
will
get back to the office, I will catch up the all pending Verb problem
apply
work
by do
overtime.
Change the verb form
doing
Finally
, I need your support for approval So, that i
can do Change the capitalization
I
work
for six months in our company's head office and get more enlightment
Correct your spelling
enlightenment
of
the Change preposition
about
work
.
I look forward to your positive reply.
Your sincerly
,
Sarbjeet SinghCorrect your spelling
sincerely
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Tone
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Grammar & Spelling
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Structure
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Consistency
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Flow
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The Closing
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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,