The chart below shows how fish canning is done.

The chart below shows how fish canning is done.
The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing process for canning
fish
.
Overall
,
this
procedure involves several phases, commencing with catching and cooking the
fish
before canning it,
then
going through the sterilization stages to produce canned
fish
products, and culminating with delivery to customers. The initial stages focus on fishing by boat or through aquaculture. By
this
stage, the
fish
has been frozen at a low temperature of -18 degrees Celsius, weighed, and thawed in preparation for the next stages. Eventually,
fish
go through cooking phases using steam and
subsequently
cooling prior to filleting
fish
into uniformly sized portions. In the subsequent phase after filleting
fish
,
fish
is canned with brine,
as well as
water or oil. The cans are
then
sealed so as to sterilize them and cool them.
After
this
stage is complete, the post-sterilised cans are labelled
according to
the type of
fish
and moved to the storage section to be transported to the customers.
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