The diagram belows show the production of olive oil.
The given diagram illustrates the procedure for manufacturing olive
oil
. Overall
, it is a fairly complex process with numerous stages, commencing with picking mature olives
from the trees, passing through mechanical stages, and terminating with the separation of oil
from water, ready for the oil
to be packaged and distributed to wholesalers.
The initial phase focuses on preparing olives
for the pressing stage. The entire procedure initiates with the gathering of olives
, accomplished either manually or mechanically, followed by rinsing in cool water to remove any dirt or excessive. After
this
step, the prepared olives
are transported by a conveyor belt into a large vat. Here, they are smashed until they separate into two distinctive parts: olive stones and olive paste (the flesh of olives
).
Once the olive paste is ready, it is placed in numerous large bags with holes, facilitating the extraction of oil
from the paste. The bags are then
loaded into a pressing machine, where they are compressed to extract a liquid mixture of olive oil
and water. After the stage is complete, the liquid is placed into a special container to separate the oil
from the former liquid. The whole process terminates when the oil
is packaged and transported to stores for sale or storage.Submitted by 💖 Hoang Nhan palace 💖 on
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