In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is the case? What can be done about this problem?

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the development of

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field. In my perspective, there are two main reasons that

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essay. First of all, poverty is one of the crucial reasons leading to

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populations who lack

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education, so

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them to look for a job to have savings, and

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they do not have

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money to afford their daily expense. These orders lead to the

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of famine even

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are living in a modern society where the quantities of

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all over the world. We can tackle

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problem

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many ways

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as giving the group of people who are illiterate the chance to go to school, teaching them how to use the advances to cultivate, so they can manufacture

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the phenomena of war which is

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in many parts of the world. Take the conflict between Russia and

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, millions of residents in both

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countries lost their homes, their possesses. These citizens have to migrate, they

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neither work nor have

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news on a website before, it was written that the

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with

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but they need to follow Russian soldiers. In my point of view,

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think that the government should take

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awareness of peace through social media, education and so on. To

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, starvation is a challenge even recently when we innovated amount of advances which improve

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life

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still cannot erase it immediately,

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believe that if one day people

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the whole earth cooperate, we will handle

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