The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee ad tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates in percentages the frequency with which the Australian population drinks
coffee
and tea in 5 different cities
.
In general, the population in all four cities
has demonstrated throughout the data that they prefer to drink caffeine outside of their places of residence. In addition
, in the last
four weeks
individuals have drunk more instant espresso than fresh.
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weeks,
Firstly
, more than 50% of the population in cities
such
as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart had had a
Correct article usage
apply
coffee
or tea in a coffee
shop in the last
month. Whereas
, in Adeleine less than half of the community went out for caffeine or tea in the same time period.
Secondly
, the community that took instant coffee
in the last
month presented a significant fluctuation between cities
. For example
, three metropolises were below 50% of preferences, with only Brisbane and Hobart reaching more than half but less than 55%. In addition
, the lowest preferences were the same in all five cities
, which was fresh coffee
in the last
month, with some metropolises achieving less than 35% of total preferences.
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