The table below shows how young people in Tokyo , Japan, listened to music over the previous month. the pei chart shows a record company international finding about whethwe people preferred live or recorded music. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavant.
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The given table illustrates the different methods individuals used in Tokyo , Japan, to listen to
music
during the last
month , and the pie chart depicts finding
of a record company, in foreign countries on preference for live or recorded Correct article usage
the finding
music
.
Overall
, the largest number of individuals in Tokyo used to listen to music
via live music
and mp3
players over CDs Correct your spelling
MP3
while
in foreign countries people loved to hear
to live Verb problem
listen
music
the most compared to recorded.
In detail,the highest number of 79% of males in Tokyo have preferred mp3 players as the method to listen to music
during the last
month , whereas
the largest number of
44% of females utilized live Change preposition
apply
music
to enjoy songs and tunes. However
, both males and females have used CDs in
the least amount of times 19% and 22% to listen to Change preposition
apply
music
.
In addition
, an overwhelming majority of 70% of foreign individuals had listened
live Add the preposition
listened to
music
while
a modest just more than one fourth
had listened to recorded Add a hyphen
one-fourth
music
, and a minority of 4% posted in the don't know category in the record company's findings.Submitted by dinaka0001 on
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