Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons behind this view? What are the solutions to change it?
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the
key factor Correct article usage
a
of
the Change preposition
in
nation
economy. With the support of Change noun form
nation's
tourism
, Correct article usage
the country
country
annual revenue increases which Change noun form
country's
government
can spend on building Correct article usage
the government
road
, and making new Fix the agreement mistake
roads
tourist
spots. Some folks believe that's
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that
tourism
is not good for nation
because effects on Add an article
the nation
natural
environment of Add an article
the natural
country
,and Add an article
the country
a country
damage
of
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to
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the nation
nation
heritage properties.
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nation's
Firstly
, some people thinks
that Change the verb form
think
tourism
has Correct article usage
a wrose
wrose
impact on Correct your spelling
worse
whose
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the country
country
natural environment Change noun form
country's
due to
more usage of automatics which increase the
pollution. Correct article usage
apply
For example
,In Delhi
tourists are using more Add a comma
Delhi,
taxi
, Uber and Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
rent a vechile
for transportation which is Replace the word
rented vehicles
easy
way to explore the state but it Add an article
an easy
increase
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increases
the
air pollution and Correct article usage
apply
effecting
air quality and Verb problem
affects
some time
it is so hard to Replace the word
sometimes
breath
in poor quality Replace the word
breathe
of
air. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, natural
habitat of Add an article
the natural
nation
people Correct article usage
the nation
are
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is
effects
. Correct your spelling
affected
Furthermore
, some tourist
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tourists
are
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apply
damage
the country
property Change noun form
country's
such
as Correct article usage
the country
country
traditional heritage. Change noun form
country's
For example
, in Amristsar
(Punjab) one Correct your spelling
Amritsar
tourist
throw
the paint on Wrong verb form
threw
sculpture
of Uadam Singh. That's Add an article
the sculpture
a sculpture
way
people Correct your spelling
why
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think
thinks
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think
tourist
Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
damage
their Replace the word
cultural
culture
heritage.
Moving forward, every problem has Replace the word
cultural
the
solution Correct article usage
a
such
as making some guideline
and Fix the agreement mistake
guidelines
start
more public transportation for Wrong verb form
starting
tourist
. Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Government
needs to set the target Add an article
The government
of
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for
tourist
to visit the Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
country
as well as
they need to make some guildline
so Correct your spelling
guideline
guidelines
tourist
cannot spoil or Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
damage
the
religious things and if they do there should Correct article usage
apply
some
penalty on it. Add a missing verb
be some
Lastly
, government
need to start some public Add an article
the government
transports
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transport
for
famous places so they can use more which will help to reduce Change preposition
to
the
pollution Correct article usage
apply
helps to
save the natural environment.
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and
To conclude
, with
making Change preposition
apply
of
some Change preposition
apply
rule
and Fix the agreement mistake
rules
regulation
and starting Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
of
more public transportation is helpful for saving the Change preposition
apply
nation
from tourism
because Add an article
the tourist
tourist
is helpful for Replace the word
tourism
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the nations
nations
economyChange noun form
nation's
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