WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The picture demonstrates how to recycle
plastic
bottles
in rubbish resolving fatories
.
After the Correct your spelling
factories
bottles
made by
Change preposition
of
plastic
are throwed to
trash bins, Change preposition
into
garbage
truck is likely to pour trash into the truck Add an article
a garbage
the garbage
container
which Fix the agreement mistake
containers
use
to recycle and deliver Wrong verb form
are used
wastes
to Fix the agreement mistake
waste
recycling
Correct article usage
the recycling
cnter
. People working there begin to sort out Correct your spelling
centre
plastic
bottles
through all the recycable
trash. Correct your spelling
recyclable
Then
the bottles
is
likely to be compressed into blocks which can be easily crushed into pieces and these small pieces need to Change the verb form
are
be wash
thoroughly in a washing tank.
During the next step of recycling, Change the verb form
be washed
plastic
fragments are milled to
Change preposition
into
plastic
pellets in a machine and then
these pellets need to be heated to form raw materials. Next,
the raw materials are packed together to be produced into end products including clothes, pens, bags as well as
plastic
saws.
Overall
, the process of recycling bottles
made by
Change preposition
of
plastic
containing
9 steps in total Wrong verb form
contains
which
all these steps are significant and effective.Correct word choice
and
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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