WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The picture demonstrates how to recycle
plastic
bottles
in rubbish resolving
fatories
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factories
. After the
bottles
made
by
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of
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plastic
are throwed
to
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into
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trash bins,
garbage
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a garbage
the garbage
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truck is likely to pour trash into the truck
container
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containers
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which
use
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are used
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to recycle and deliver
wastes
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waste
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to
recycling
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the recycling
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cnter
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centre
. People working there begin to sort out
plastic
bottles
through all the
recycable
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recyclable
trash.
Then
the
bottles
is
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are
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likely to be compressed into blocks which can be easily crushed into pieces and these small pieces need to
be wash
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be washed
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thoroughly in a washing tank. During the next step of recycling,
plastic
fragments are milled
to
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into
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plastic
pellets in a machine and
then
these pellets need to be heated to form raw materials.
Next,
the raw materials are packed together to be produced into end products including clothes, pens, bags
as well as
plastic
saws.
Overall
, the process of recycling
bottles
made
by
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of
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plastic
containing
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contains
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9 steps in total
which
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and
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all these steps are significant and effective.
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