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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise theinformation by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The picture demonstrates how to recycle
plastic
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bottles
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 in rubbish resolving
fatories
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factories
. After the
bottles
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 made
by
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of
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plastic
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 are throwed
to
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into
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 trash bins,
garbage
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a garbage
the garbage
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 truck is likely to pour trash into the truck
container
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containers
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 which
use
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are used
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 to recycle and deliver
wastes
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waste
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 to
recycling
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the recycling
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cnter
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centre
. People working there begin to sort out
plastic
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bottles
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 through all the
recycable
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recyclable
 trash.
Then
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 the
bottles
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is
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are
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 likely to be compressed into blocks which can be easily crushed into pieces and these small pieces need to
be wash
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be washed
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 thoroughly in a washing tank. During the next step of recycling,
plastic
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 fragments are milled
to
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into
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plastic
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 pellets in a machine and
then
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 these pellets need to be heated to form raw materials.
Next,
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the raw materials are packed together to be produced into end products including clothes, pens, bags
as well as
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plastic
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 saws.
Overall
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, the process of recycling
bottles
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 made
by
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of
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plastic
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containing
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contains
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 9 steps in total
which
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and
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 all these steps are significant and effective.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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