Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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of happiness varies from person to person opinion.
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few people opine that
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childhood is the most enjoyable part of
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, others
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adulthood is the prime
time
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of
life
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. In my perspective, children have the most spare
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and
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responsibilities, so they would be those enjoying their
life
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at full potential.
This
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essay will discuss both opinions before reaching a concrete decision.
Firstly
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,
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proponents
of adolescent age advocate for the
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and least reponsible
lifestlyle
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lifestyle
it offers. Mostly, teenagers do not have to deal with any serious situations that require them to make hard
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or have
a very crucial responsibilities
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on their shoulders.
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, Children have free
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which they usually
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socializing in schools, parks and other places.
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, they get more quality
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to spend with friends and family as compared to their parents leading to a stress-free and joyful
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.
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, we can observe more number of teenagers hanging out with
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their
friends.
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, people
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the best
time
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to enjoy
life
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is adulthood
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freedom and more opportunities as the topmost benefits.
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have full authority to make
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related to any perspective of
life
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.
Niether
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Neither
they
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have to rely on someone to make
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decisions
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decisions
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nor they are required to ask for anyone's permission.
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, adult people can make any
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without even asking for
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their
parents
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permission. Another point worth considering is the number of opportunities adulthood serves. There are many things that are considered dangerous to children but are normal for adults. To illustrate,
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adult can enjoy the thrill skydiving offers where minors are not allowed.
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,
grown up
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grown-ups
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can enjoy
independent
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lifestyle and have access to great opportunities. Childhood brings more joy in
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due to
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omnipresence
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the omnipresence
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of quality
time
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that can be enjoyed freely and
less
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responsibilities to deal with.
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Your introduction and conclusion are present, which is good. However, ensure they are both clear and directly address the prompt. Your conclusion should summarize the key points made in your essay and clearly state your opinion.
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Support your main points with more detailed examples. This will strengthen your argument and make your essay more persuasive. Try to include specific instances or personal experiences that directly relate to the topic.
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Address the task fully by discussing both views presented in the prompt and clearly stating your own opinion. Make sure each section of your essay contributes to this task.
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Use specific examples to support your claims. These examples can be drawn from your personal experiences, historical events, or observed behaviors. They make your argument more convincing and engaging to the reader.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • adolescence
  • fulfillment
  • responsibilities
  • exploration
  • long-term goals
  • sense of stability
  • carefree
  • contentment
  • well-being
  • life stage
  • unique opportunities
  • deep satisfaction
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