The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what are the possible solutions?
One of the widely discussed
issue
nowadays is that the Internet has not just benefits but Change to a plural noun
issues
also
negative sides. The exist
problem is Internet fishing Change the verb form
existing
websites
with bad consequences and the most viable solution is a
strict government supervision over suspicious Remove the article
apply
websites
and apps.
The principal problem relating
to special Wrong verb form
relates
websites
which can lead to detrimental situations of
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in
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a persons
persons
life when their Change noun form
person's
money
might be taken away dishonestly. These sites are able to steal your personal data such
as login, password or even to get access to your credit card throw
hacking. Resulting in losing Correct your spelling
through
money
, or inability of having
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to have
an
access to your personal pages on social networking. Remove the article
apply
For instance
, according to
the latest report by the Ministry of Internal affairs
over 58% of Capitalize word
Affairs
total
population used fishing sites once where they you can observe that someone withdrew their Add an article
the total
money
.
To tackle this
problem the government should be involved in implementing strict measures to identify and block such
online threats. This
means some malicious online pages must be banned under government supervision as soon as special artificial intelligence software detected
any of them. Wrong verb form
detects
Also
, State representatives can create a list of such
swindling websites
to warn people. For example
, Almost, every fifth person in Kazakhstan were
taken by Change the verb form
was
such
websites
and applications two years ago, however
some promotional videos have been created to alert people and Add a comma
however,
such
cases has
declined Correct subject-verb agreement
have
considerable
since Change the adjective
considerably
then
.
In conclusion, in spite of brilliant
help of digital sources for Correct article usage
the brilliant
humans
there are Add a comma
humans,
also
several negative consequences as unknown and suspicious pages where citizens can be cheated for money
online. The solution is when officials take under control social medias
which can cause negative Correct your spelling
media
money matter
consequences.Add a hyphen
money-matter
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