The bar chart compares female unemployment rates in the four countries of the UK in 2013 and 2014.
The bar chart above shows the statistics of unemployed females during 2013 and 2014 in four different countries of the UK.
The information is related to four countries which are England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland. The green bar represents the data in 2013, meanwhile the blue bar presents the records
of
2014.
The unemployment rates of England and Scotland are relatively high. They ranged from 6.1% to 6.8%. Change preposition
for
On the other hand
, Wales and Northern Ireland have lower rates which are around 4.6% to 5.6%. Linking Words
In addition
, Scotland is the only one that comes up with an increasing movement. It increased significantly from 6.1% to 6.7% and had the highest figure in 2014. Female employees are likely to be hired in the rest countries as it's improving. Linking Words
This
could be an opportunity for them to apply for a job in the future. Linking Words
According to
the gender equality policy which was supported by the government and Linking Words
also
non-profit-oriented organisations, businesses tend to hire various genders of candidates.Linking Words
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