some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

in the modern era, many individuals show

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appreciate

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effort and hard

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in human life but other

people

hold the opposite view that it is better to prior finance and the way they look as the most vital things in order to succeed. From my perspective, I believe that determination and hard

work

will help

people

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success

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in both

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of

work

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Initially

, working hard with ambition will reach

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However

,

people

have to be patient to get the best outcome. Take Nguyen Khuyen students as a typical example there, these students have to

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study

day by day

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three years in high school so as to prepare for their final test to get qualification and

as a consequence

, all of them get

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good universities.

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,

people

often listen to

successful

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businessman

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on

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as

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way of being inspired to make an effort to complete their

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. Another point worth considering is that many

people

believe

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good

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and

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stable

of

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finance

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finances

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will

the

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best

source

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lead to success in

work

, even life.

This

may be true but it is easily

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that there

are

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minor

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of

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people

who only have money but

also

have beauty but without determination and dedication can approach

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to

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their goal.

Besides

, being lazy and

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on money without working will eventually lead to

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failure

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For example

, a businessman will never succeed only being rich.

To sum up

, everything mentioned and both views are all keys to

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what you want. But in my opinion, hard

work

and dedication

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the best

way

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to reach success more than being

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on money and good

look

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.