The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.
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The map given illustrates the development of the village of Stokeford over a period between 1930 and 2010. From an
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perspective, it is evident that the town has transformed from a rural area with a lot of farmland to an urban zone with numerous
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. As can be seen on the map, farmlands located in the northeast as in the south of the town had been eliminated to make way for new houses. In the centre of the village, a post office and a primary school had remained the same,
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, the school had been extended. Shops had been destroyed to make space for the construction of housing,
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, two new roads have been built to connect them. In the east of the village, gardens and a large house had been turned into a retirement home. From the west of
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facility, a new neighbourhood had been established.
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, a host of townhouses had been placed along the road that runs from the north to the south with a bridge to cross a river stoke.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • architectural styles
  • amenities
  • communal spaces
  • technological advancements
  • modernization
  • transportation systems
  • urbanized zones
  • local economy
  • environmental impact
  • green spaces
  • urban development
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