The line graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan.
The line graph illustrates the change
of
monthly Change preposition
in
price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
in
three metals in 2014. Change preposition
of
Overall
, the percentages
of copper, nickel
Correct word choice
and nickel
decrease
significantly in the given period, Wrong verb form
decreased
while
zinc increase
significantly.
On the one hand, the price of nickel started at 6% in January and fell down to the lowest point in June at -3%. Afterwards, the Wrong verb form
increased
percentages
rose to 1% and constant
before decreasing slightly Add a missing verb
were constant
at
-2% in October. Nickel reached Change preposition
to
peak
point at 1% in NovemberCorrect article usage
a peak
and
. Copper started the year at 2% and decreased slightly around -1% in May. After that, the price declined Correct word choice
apply
at
1% in July before constant until September. The Change preposition
by
percentages
of copper reached Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
peak
Correct article usage
a peak
more
at 1/% in December after decreasing slightly in October.
Correct quantifier usage
apply
On the other hand
, zinc prices started from 1% in January and increase
dramatically Wrong verb form
increased
at
3% before Change preposition
to
fell
down to -1% in June, which was the lowest point of zinc. Afterwards, prices increase slightly approximately at -1% in July and constant until September. Wrong verb form
falling
Moreover
, the percentages
decline to -1% before rising at
2% in December.Change preposition
to
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 4 times.
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