Many individuals dispute that hard work and desire to lead to
,
however
, some
people
think that having
money
and
can
in
life
. In my point of view, I support the idea that hard
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and determination can lead to
.
The main
factor
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people
to Change the verb form
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become
is
people
need to become more
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in
life
due to
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toChange preposition
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other subjectChange the wording
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can help you to become more professional in your field. Not only hard
workingReplace the word
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in
life
but
also
human Correct word choice
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need to be more
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or desire because it will improve our mind to become more active and we can have
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strong thinking to deal with
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.
This
factor
can help
people
to succeed in
life
more when the rivalry of getting
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in the modern day is
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serious. Being hard working is a good character to increase the percentage of
in
life
because
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being hard working is helping us to gain more
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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to update our
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day by day.
On the other hand
,
money
and
also
have
aChange the article
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important impact
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the scale of
.
Due to havingChange preposition
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money
is a good way to improve the quality of soft
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which
helpingWrong verb form
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people
's job
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a lot. None of
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wantChange the verb form
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someone who
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have any special ability to work for them.
Therefore
. having
money
and appearance can help
people
to find
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more easily and easier to become
in the future.
To conclude
, the main
factor
that
helpingChange the form of the verb
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people
to become
is
theyCorrect your spelling
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need to
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more hard work and desire in
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life
.
This
factor
will
haveVerb problem
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people
to become more
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and
havingWrong verb form
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enough knowledge so they can become
.