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The line graph illustrates the population of three counties, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington state of Oregon which increased over 60 years, between 1940 and 2000. Washington has the highest population of three counties in 60 years

The line graph illustrates the population of three counties, Columbia, Yamhill and Washington state of Oregon which increased over 60 years, between 1940 and 2000. Washington has the highest population of three counties in 60 years
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The given line graph illustrates the number of populations in three
counties
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 of Oregon, one of the US states, from 1940 to 2000. [The
counties
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 are divided into
Columbia
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,
Yamhill
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 ,and Washington.]
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, It is obvious that Washington had far more inhabitants than
Yamhill
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 and
Columbia
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counties
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 throughout the period.
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, these three
counties
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 shared the same increasing trends. The increases were particularly obvious after 1970. In 1940, The populations in Washington were approximately 75,000
people
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. After that, the county experienced a drastic growth until 1970, with nearly 120,000
people
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 residing.
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, in 2000, the number rocketed to reach a peak of 245,000
people
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.
Columbia
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 and
Yamhill
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counties
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 followed a similar pattern, with
Yamhill
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 slightly surpassing in numbers, starting at around 25,000 and 30,000
people
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, respectively. The populations in both
counties
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 rose gradually until 1970,
then
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 rose dramatically to finish at about 60,000
people
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 for
Columbia
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 and 90,000
people
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 for
Yamhill
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words counties, columbia, yamhill, people with synonyms.
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