the chart below shows global sale of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
The graph illustrates the
sales
of five top-tier mobile companies worldwide in the year 2009, 2011 & 2013 respectively.
Overall
, three mobile brand's sales
have risen in consecutive years whereas
the other two brand's sales
have fallen. Although
Nokia had a good amount of sales
in 2009 but could not keep it till 2013.
Samsung sold more than 200 million phones in 2009 and gradually kept rising till 2011, achieving the highest sales
with almost 470 million. Moreover
, Apple and ZTE have also
surged their sales
throughout the period.
Despite Nokia having the most soldout phones in 2009, the sale declined significantly in 2013 and the portion is nearly a third of 2011. LG left 2009 with the sale of over 100 million phones and kept falling slightly till 2013.Submitted by anzuman.asha13 on
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