You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend. Write to your friend. In your letter •Tell your friend you can’t come •Explain why you are unable to attend •Arrange another time to meet You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Annie!
I hope you're doing well! Congratulations! for your promotion. I'
m
just writing this
to let you know that I'm
not able to come to your party .Unfortunately! I'
Change noun form
I
m
not able to request those days off because my boss going on Correct your spelling
'm
vaccation
next Correct your spelling
vacation
week
.
I was really excited for
coming to your party and Change preposition
about
celebrate
the success of your promotion .Wrong verb form
celebrating
However
, when i
submitted day off requests for next Change the capitalization
I
week
then
my supervisor told me that I need
to be Wrong verb form
needed
incharge
of Correct your spelling
in charge
whole
restaurant for a Change the article
the whole
week
because he is
going on Wrong verb form
was
vaccation
.
As you know , I'Correct your spelling
vacation
m
First Assisstant
Manager in the restaurant , after my supervisor .Correct your spelling
Assistant
Therefore
,I'm
responsible for the employee schedules and closing of the restaurant at 10 pm . Beside
Replace the word
Besides
this
, stat coming next week
on weekend
, so there will be huge sales projected in the schedule. It's totally out of my Correct article usage
the weekend
hand
now.
Again sorry for not Fix the agreement mistake
hands
been
there for you but we'll catch up later for sure . Please don't feel bad because Wrong verb form
being
i
am planning to visit you Change the capitalization
I
at the end
of this
month when my boss arrive
after Change the verb form
arrives
vaccation
Correct your spelling
vaccination
then
we will have plenty of time to chat .
Please reply me
as soon as.
Best wishes,
Roopkamal Change preposition
to me
kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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Tone & Structure
Use consistent and formal salutations (e.g., 'Dear Annie' instead of 'Dear Annie!'). Avoid using exclamation points in such contexts.
Structure
Organize your ideas more clearly across paragraphs. Begin with explaining why you can't come, then detail your reason in a new paragraph, and suggest meeting again in a final paragraph.
Grammar & Punctuation
Check your grammar and punctuation. Avoid run-on sentences and ensure proper use of commas and periods. For instance, '...let you know that I'm not able to come to your party. Unfortunately, I'm...',
Spelling & Capitalization
Correct spelling and capitalization errors. For example, 'vacation' instead of 'vaccation', and avoid random capitalization of words within sentences.
Closing
End your letter with a suitable closing, such as 'Looking forward to...,' followed by your name. Ensure the sign-off is formal and matches the tone of the letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.
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