The chart below shows information about wages for healthcare professionals in four different countries.
The given table illustrates data regarding how much money employees who work in hospitals gain on average per
month
in four different parts of the world,namely,Country
A,B,C and D.
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Countries
Overall
,what stands out from the graph is that in areas where professionals come from abroad,the amount of wage is higher than that in source countries.
Looking into detail,nurses and doctors in country
A obtain the least amount of money per month
(35 and 64 dollar
respectively) and Change to a plural noun
dollars
İn
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in
other destination
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another destination country
other destination countries
country
,wage
for doctors is twice as much as that for nurses(700 and 350 Add an article
the wage
dollar
respectively).
With regard to the countries where health care workers come from other parts of the world,there is little Change to a plural noun
dollars
differencr
in the amount of money per Correct your spelling
difference
month
for nurses(almost 3000 dollar
).Change to a plural noun
dollars
While
in the former ,doctors receive 5500 dollar
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dollars
for
each Change preposition
apply
month
,this
number in country
D is higher significantly($ 10200)Submitted by writingbhos on
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