maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions . do you agree or disagree.

In recent years ,

computer

technology has dominated globally

hence

it reduces the

maintainace

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maintenance

of public

libraries

since they are no longer in usage to a greater

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.

however

, it

have

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the

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advantages and disadvantages

for example

people

tend to understand

on

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hardcopies so they will be in need of

libraries

, expensive to take care

for

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as the bills will need to be catered for and the workers , inclusively. Maintaining

of

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public

libraries

is

time consuming

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in terms of one needs to go and do the cleaning yet the probability of

people

to come

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on that day is zero. Moreso,it is expensive to

cater

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for the bills of water, taxes,

salary

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and salary

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of the workers

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unlike

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a computer

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computer

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computers

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.To add on , it is a

non profit

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organisation since it is not flexible for

people

to come

everyday

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.

However

,

computer

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is very

much

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easy to access as

individual

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individuals

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can just use it

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an

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time they can even

carrry

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carry

it wherever they want to go.

furthermore

, there are

variety

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of books and even materials to practice on

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therefore

,

people

tend to favour using

computer

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but using

computer

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usually one

looses

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loses

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focus because of adverts

of

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other things will

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popping up in my own opinion , maintaining public

libraries

is a waste of money as the advantages of using

computer

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computers

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outweighs the disadvantages of taking care of

libraries