The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the hydroelectric power station and how it generates electricity. It is the station which produces electrical current by using water.
Overall
, the potential plant had a lot of work during the daytime it produces electricity and at night time it saves drink and energy for electrical current production.
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However
, during the daytime drink comes from the river to the dam in the high-level reservoir where intake is taken during the process, now it is open Linking Words
then
flows aqua from a high level to a low level and some water is saved in the low-level reservoir. Linking Words
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, the next aqua flows to the generator, where the Blades of turbines swipe and produce heat. Linking Words
Furthermore
, now these power stations send heat through ability lines to the national grid which takes current to all parts of the country.
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Moreover
, in the night-time, the drink which is stored in the low-level reservoir goes back to the generator in the production plant and generates some heat for use. Linking Words
Also
, the flow of aqua is towards the dam where the intake is closed at night time, the water is stored for day time to produce electrical energy.Linking Words
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