IELTS Writing Task 1: 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel

IELTS Writing Task 1: 'modes of travel' answer

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.

m

Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel
The table
showed
Wrong verb form
shows
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information about
travel
in England and
table
Correct article usage
the table
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given
Add the auxiliary verb
gave
has given
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average
Correct article usage
the average
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distance per person between 1985 and 2000. As the data represented
travel
distance by car is the highest average
about
Change preposition
of about
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3100 miles in 1985 and the lowest average
travel
in
same
Add an article
the same
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year using taxis.
Furthermore
, the average distance slightly increased to 4809
mile
Change to a plural noun
miles
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in 2000 when cars were used to transport which
mean
Correct subject-verb agreement
means
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people
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
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depended upon cars during that period of time. The train service was increased between these years because development of new rail lines of transportation.
On the other hand
, local
bus
Fix the agreement mistake
buses
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were reduced
of using
Change preposition
in use
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, it might other services fast and comfortable to
travel
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words travel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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