IELTS Writing Task 1: 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel
The table
showed
information about Wrong verb form
shows
travel
in England and table
Correct article usage
the table
given
Add the auxiliary verb
gave
has given
average
distance per person between 1985 and 2000. As the data represented Correct article usage
the average
travel
distance by car is the highest average about
3100 miles in 1985 and the lowest average Change preposition
of about
travel
in same
year using taxis. Add an article
the same
Furthermore
, the average distance slightly increased to 4809 mile
in 2000 when cars were used to transport which Change to a plural noun
miles
mean
people Correct subject-verb agreement
means
were
depended upon cars during that period of time. The train service was increased between these years because development of new rail lines of transportation. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, local bus
were reduced Fix the agreement mistake
buses
of using
, it might other services fast and comfortable to Change preposition
in use
travel
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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