The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
The given bar graphs show figures about the
percentage
of people who had computers between 2002 and 2010 Use synonyms
as well as
a comparison by educational level in 2002 and 2010. Linking Words
Overall
, there was an increase in computer ownership from 2002 to 2010. The level of education more often on the owner of Linking Words
this
kind of electronic device was a postgraduate qualification. All levels presented an evolution Linking Words
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percentage
when compared to 2010 to 2002.
The first chart depicts a constant improvement over the years, split into a two-year range. In 2002, the Use synonyms
percentage
of the population that bought a personal computer was about 55%. In 2010, Use synonyms
this
amount jumped to almost 75%. Linking Words
This
graph indicates a positive trend for the next years.
The second chart illustrates the same information, Linking Words
however
, by education level and comparing only two years Linking Words
instead
of five. People who do not have high school diplomas was the less frequent division, but it was the group that achieved the highest improvement, almost three times more from 2002 to 2010, from 15% to 45%, respectively. Bachelor's degree and postgraduate qualification are the clusters with a higher Linking Words
percentage
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and at the same time the group who increased less.Remove the comma
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