The graph shows average temperatures in Paris, Dubai and Sydney
The chart compares three major cities in terms of
the
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temperatures
beginning from January to December
.
Overall
, the three massive regions experienced different trends in the time period. While
the large cities such
as Dubai and Paris go up with some fluctuations, the approximately other region Sydney go
down slightly in Correct subject-verb agreement
goes
this
period.
As the graph shows the major city Dubai started by 19% temperatures
in January, followed by a small growth to around 36% temperatures
in August. Then
it declined steadily until it fell to just over 20$ temperatures
in Correct your spelling
20
December
. Regarding
Paris region Correct word choice
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has
a significant increase Wrong verb form
had
by
16% in June , but Change preposition
of
this
city has a
moderate growth with some variations from August to Correct article usage
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December
. The next Sydney begun
by 24% in January and during Wrong verb form
began
this
period have
a gradual decline with some fluctuations , Wrong verb form
had
then
it increased considerably in May by 16% to 23% in December
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