The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart below shows information about the country of birth of
people
living in Australia
and the table illustrates where people
born in these countries
live.
Overall
, there are 5 countries
, and the percentage of people
who live in cities and rural areas is in the table. There are 5 countries
in the pie chart either, and one section is "other". We also
have the percentage of the country of birth of people
living in Australia
.
The country of birth of people
living in Australia
is 100% in the pie chart. 73% is Australians, 14% is the Netherlands, and other sections of countries
like the UK, New Zealand, and China account for 7%, 3%, and 2%.
We have 5 countries
such
as UK, Correct quantifier usage
apply
Australia
, China, New Zealand, and the Netherlands in the table. A lot of people
, exactly 99% of them live in cities in China. Only 1% of citizens live in rural areas. 90-99% of people
in all countries
live in cities. 1-20% of people
live in rural areas in all countries
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