The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.

The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots.
the picture describes the
process
of making ceramic
pots
.
overall
, the
process
combines a number of steps, beginning with collecting raw materials and ending with firing colour on
pots
. At the beginning of the manufacture, the raw materials for making up pot are picked up, after which they are transported by trunks to a factory where they will be cooked.
Subsequently
, those raw stuffs are crushed in order to make it easier for the mixing step which will be added with water. After the mixing substance is led through a pipe into a mould,
then
they leave them there dried for 4-6 hours. Once finished, those clay particular shape
pots
are assembled. The
process
continues with the pot being put in an oven at 1,000 degrees Celsius to keep their shapes permanently. At the final stage of the
process
, to make it more attractive, the
pots
are painted a new colour, which is followed by firing it once more time so that the colour will not be worn out in the future.
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  • manufacturing
  • ceramic pots
  • preparation
  • material
  • purifying
  • consistency
  • shaping
  • potter's wheel
  • molded
  • drying
  • baking
  • kiln
  • decorating
  • painting
  • glazing
  • engraving
  • quality check
  • packaging
  • distribution
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