The charts below show the result of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reason why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart encapsulates the contributing factors that have influenced adults’ decisions to
study
, while
the pie chart illustrates the ideal notion on
how the tuition fee should be apportioned in society.
Change preposition
of
Overall
, the majority of respondents share their learning purpose because keen on studying the subject. As for the fund, the survey reveal
the one who has the biggest responsibility to pay Change the verb form
reveals
their
Change preposition
for their
study
is
those who decide to enroll in a course.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
According to
the bar chart, having interest
Add an article
an interest
in particular
subjects seem
to predominate the decision of 40% Correct subject-verb agreement
seems
adults
to take courses. Following that reason, the desire to gain qualifications comes as the second biggest Change preposition
of adults
contributors
to 38% of them. Fix the agreement mistake
contributor
Moreover
, there are 22% of adult people who
see that continuing their Correct pronoun usage
apply
study
can be helpful for their current job. Meanwhile, the ambition to improve prospects of promotion Fix the agreement mistake
studies
as well as
desire
to learn or Add an article
the desire
a desire
study
are chosen by 20% of adult respondents as their study
reasons. Finally
, only less than 15% admit that their study
aims are due to
their expectations to have a career shift and meet other people, which accounts for 12% and 9%, respectively.
Regarding to
the tuition fee, it can be seen from the survey that 40% of funds should come from those who Remove the preposition
apply
enroll
themselves in the course, Change the spelling
enrol
whereas
35% of it must bepaid
by the employer. Correct your spelling
be paid
Finally
, the rest of the fees should be aided
by taxpayers.Verb problem
paid
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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