The flow chart illustrates the consequnces of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The flow chart illustrates the impact of logging. In
this
flow chart you can see that Linking Words
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apply
the
deforestation is divided Correct article usage
apply
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into
to
four directions “heavy logging equipment”, “fewer roots hold”, “increased risk of burnings” and “Change preposition
into
plantrs
return less moisture to air”.
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planters
plants
Firstly
, you can see that heavy logging equipment causes soil Linking Words
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to more
more
hard and backed Correct your spelling
move
subsequently
, Linking Words
because
of Correct word choice
and because
this
, rainwater drains and creates flooding.
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Next,
the accompanying consequence of logging is that there are fewer roots to hold together. Leading to soil erosion.
The third effect of deforestation is causedLinking Words
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by a
a
big risk of burning which can lead to waste wood Correct article usage
the
therefore
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its
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it
lead
to Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
scarce
of Correct article usage
a scarce
micro-organism
which is the main reason Fix the agreement mistake
micro-organisms
of
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for
degradation
of vegetation Correct article usage
the degradation
hence
There Linking Words
are
less biodiversity.
The Change the verb form
is
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final
fainal
result of Correct your spelling
final
this
is less moisture Linking Words
to
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in
air
from plants which Correct article usage
the air
contribute
to less precipitation after a big risk of droughtCorrect subject-verb agreement
contributes
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