The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart illustrates the annual number of

hours

which every

totur

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tutor

tour

tought

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taught

thought

in three

level

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levels

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educating

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education

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including Primary, Lower Secondery, and Upper Secondery for four various

country

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countries

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consisting Japan, Spain,

Oceland

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Iceland

, and

USA

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the USA

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during

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2001.

Overal

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Overall

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, the comparison among the different levels of teaching states that in

this

one-year period of

study

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study,

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all educating

hourse

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horse

hours

course

which

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in which

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teachers carried out their main duty were

incresed

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increased

in each selected country by

rising

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raising

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the age of students.That means the most

hours

of teaching have been done by

highschool 's

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highschool

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teachers in all four

contries

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countries

. A rapid glance shows

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that, Total

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, Total

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the total

amount of

tuturing

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tutoring

time in

USA

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the USA

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standed

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stood

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at the top place among selected nations

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about 1,550

hours

per year,

while

Japan had the least teaching

houres

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hours

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totally

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total

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with teaching

hours

of approximately 1,950 . Focusing on details reveals that the greatest

diverse

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diversity

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between

elementry

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elementary

and higher levels teaching time was in Iceland by around 300

less

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fewer

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hours

in elementary and high

shools

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schools

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meanwhile

this

difference was subtle in Japan as the most

thiny

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thinly

tiny

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