The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features then make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above illustrates the percentage of different types of
magazines
sold in 3 years 1975, 1995 and 2015.
Overall
, while
sports
magazines
are the bestseller, the opposite was seen in food
.
Standing at 32%, sports
magazine was the most popular in 1975, followed by health
, others
, fashion
and food
with 26%, 26%, 23% and 10% respectively. Health
and others
are equal to each other with 26%, while
sports
equals two third
Correct your spelling
two-thirds
fashion
and triple food
.
After 20 years, the proportion of sports
magazines
sold increased, from 32% to 41%. Similarly
, the rate of others
and food
roses, with 5% and 13% respectively. Conversely
, the percentage of fashion
magazines
and health
sold slightly dropped. At the end
of the period, the rate of sports
magazines
grew sharply compared to the start, from 32% to 42%. Oppositely, the proportion of food
, fashion
and others
decreased significantly. Additionally
, the rate of health
magazines
sold remained unchanged.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, sports, food, health, others, fashion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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