The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features then make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of types of magazines sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and Reporting the main features then make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above illustrates the percentage of different types of
magazines
sold in 3 years 1975, 1995 and 2015.
Overall
,
while
sports
magazines
are the bestseller, the opposite was seen in
food
. Standing at 32%,
sports
magazine was the most popular in 1975, followed by
health
,
others
,
fashion
and
food
with 26%, 26%, 23% and 10% respectively.
Health
and
others
are equal to each other with 26%,
while
sports
equals
two third
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two-thirds
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fashion
and triple
food
. After 20 years, the proportion of
sports
magazines
sold increased, from 32% to 41%.
Similarly
, the rate of
others
and
food
roses, with 5% and 13% respectively.
Conversely
, the percentage of
fashion
magazines
and
health
sold slightly dropped.
At the end
of the period, the rate of
sports
magazines
grew sharply compared to the start, from 32% to 42%. Oppositely, the proportion of
food
,
fashion
and
others
decreased significantly.
Additionally
, the rate of
health
magazines
sold remained unchanged.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, sports, food, health, others, fashion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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