The table below shows the percentage of members of parliament who were women in five regions, compared to the percentage of worldwide, in 1990, 1997 and 2005.

The table below shows the percentage of members of parliament who were women in five regions, compared to the percentage of worldwide, in 1990, 1997 and 2005.
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The line graph compares the rates of female members of parliament in Germany, Italy, France,
UK
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the UK
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and Belgium over
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a period
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of 10 years.
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,
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the proportion of women
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an increase in fourth countries between 2000 to 2012,
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in Belgium it shows
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a decline
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in the rate. In detail, the UK rate was less than 5% in 2000 and it
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experienced a gradual increase throughout the years until it reached 20%
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the end of the period. Meanwhile, Belgium
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steady
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a steady
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increase but in 2012 it slightly dropped and
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around 20%. Moving on
Germany
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to Germany
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and France the probability of women
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parliament
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in
stable
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a stable
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state,
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the odd of the female in Italy
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in the same
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pattern
as the previous countries but after 2008 it
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to be the highest in
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rank.
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