The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graphs
shows
information on the percentage of people living in the Change the verb form
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Philippines
, Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Overall
, it is shown that,
all four cities followed the same trend, but Remove the comma
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Malaysia
was the most populated city with the highest percentage of predictions for 2030 and 2040.
In the first 20 years
, the Philippines
recorded the highest percentage of population of about 45% in 1990 which was followed by a decrease for the next 20 years
to reach approximately 40% in 2010. The numbers rose to reach about 43% in 2020. Although
,
the population in the Remove the comma
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Philippines
was greater than Malaysia
in the first 20 years
, the number of people living in Malaysia
rose to reach a peak of about 75% in 2020. At the end
of the prediction years
, Malaysia
and Philippines
recorded about 80%, Correct article usage
the Philippines
50
% respectively.
Thailand and Indonesia followed Correct word choice
and 50
similar
trend in the first Add an article
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20years
. The population in Indonesia rose significantly to reach a point of approximately 60% in 2040 Correct your spelling
20 years
while
the number of residents in Thailand increased gradually in the following years
to reach about 45% in the prediction year 2040.Submitted by pauly837 on
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