The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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over

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resilience of humanity

on

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fossil fuels and vehicles is linked directly

with

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the exacerbating climatic situation. There exists an idea that by inflating the

cost

of

fuel

,

indviduals

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individuals

may find it hard to afford the

cost

and may eventually stop or reduce using private vehicles. In my perspective,

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of

this

solution

outweighs

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its benefits and there are few effective alternatives to handle

this

problem.

Firstly

,

increase

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the

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in the

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cost

of

fuels

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fuel

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can introduce some other problems,

such

as

econimical

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economical

economic

crisis

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and social disparity. If lawmakers hike the

cost

of

fuel

it will directly put

burden

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the burden

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on the

nation

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economy.

Society

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dependence on fossil fuels is massive. Everyone

need

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car

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a car

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or other mode of transportation to travel.

Moreover

,

cost

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of goods delivered to a supermarket using trucks running by igniting

fuel

will

also

face a quick jump. All of these costs added up, will negatively affect the population and the

nation

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nation's

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economu

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economy

itself.

For instance

, Canada

introduces

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the carbon tax that resulted in

spiked

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cost

of goods.

Secondly

,

lower

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and

middle income

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middle-income

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group

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groups

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may find it difficult to afford the

cost

of gas,

meanwhile

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this

will

has

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negligible

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a negligible

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effect on

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the high

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high income

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high-income

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group of society.

This

can lead to social tension. Other effective solutions can be taken into consideration. To illustrate, investing in automation development. The

goverment

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government

can invest money to fund inventions related to developing efficient engines. Engines that

offers

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offer

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high

fuel

economy and

least

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the least

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contamination to nature.

For example

,

Japanese

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government gave grants to

the

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Toyota to invent the

world

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first commercial

hydrogen powered

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hydrogen-powered

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engine.

Furthermore

, awareness

campaings

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campaigns

campaign

should be conducted to motivate people to use

the

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public transport

instead

of private. In conclusion, skyrocketing the value of

fuel

can ameliorate the extreme weather conditions caused by cars and private vehicles, but it is not a comprehensive solution.