The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

The data given in the chart compares the medium degrees of weather on a monthly basis in Paris,

Dubai

and

Sydney

during that year .

Overall

,

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in

Sydney

increased gradually and it was

also

as

Dubai

's figures ,

nevertheless

, there was

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slight

flutuations

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. As for Paris, at the beginning the degrees of weather decreased slowly ,

however

,

at the end

it went up significantly,

whereas

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Sydney

and

Dubai

went down dramatically. As the line graph reveals,

initially

,

Sydney

's climate was becoming more hotter with under 20

°C

in January and there was a considerable rise until August to over 35

°C

, but its degrees declined quickly to above 20

°C

between August and December. Regarding the trends of Paris , the weather

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dropped steadily to above 10

°C

from January to July.

Subsequently

, there was a steady

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to approximately 23

°C

.

This

is

in contrast

to

Dubai

, the figure in January presents a moderate go up with some variations to 20

°C

exactly till July.

Thereafter

, it remained at the same level of temperature in Celsius to about 25

°C

during July accurately.