The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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This
chart provides key information about the average
of
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daily
hours
that some visitors of certain countries spent doing refreshment activities when they were in Greece
during
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in
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2019. The units are measured in
hours
.
Overall
, it can be seen that reading
books
and sitting at the beach
both
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together were
prefered
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preferred
activities
to
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all
tourists
.
In addition
, Chinese and
American
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Americans
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spent the highest number of
hours
in
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reading
books
,
whereas
the other two nationalities
spending
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spent
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it at the beach.
According to
what is shown, Chinese
tourists
spent 8
hours
in
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reading
books
, which was the highest compared to others,
In
contrast
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they were visiting places only for one hour, which was the lowest.
Tourists
from the USA consumed about 5
hours
to read
books
, which was slightly over than visiting places by around 2
hours
. In terms of Turkey and Brazil,
tourists
showed more interest in sitting at the beach, 4,
6
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and 6
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,
hours
respectively. Turkish visitors experienced a decline in visiting places than reading
books
by one hour, and it was
a
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two
hours
for
Brazilian
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Brazilians
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, books, tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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