The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
This
chart provides key information about the average of
daily Change preposition
apply
hours
that some visitors of certain countries spent doing refreshment activities when they were in Greece during
2019. The units are measured in Change preposition
in
hours
. Overall
, it can be seen that reading books
and sitting at the beach both
together were Correct pronoun usage
apply
prefered
activities Correct your spelling
preferred
to
all Change preposition
by
tourists
. In addition
, Chinese and American
spent the highest number of Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
hours
in
reading Change preposition
apply
books
, whereas
the other two nationalities spending
it at the beach.
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spent
According to
what is shown, Chinese tourists
spent 8 hours
in
reading Change preposition
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books
, which was the highest compared to others, In
contrast
they were visiting places only for one hour, which was the lowest. Add a comma
contrast,
Tourists
from the USA consumed about 5 hours
to read books
, which was slightly over than visiting places by around 2 hours
.
In terms of Turkey and Brazil, tourists
showed more interest in sitting at the beach, 4, 6
, Correct word choice
and 6
hours
respectively. Turkish visitors experienced a decline in visiting places than reading books
by one hour, and it was a
two Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
hours
for Brazilian
.Replace the word
Brazilians
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, books, tourists with synonyms.
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