The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given candle chart illustrates the current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP' for different European
countries
for the years
2002, 2007 and 2012.
Overall
there are percentages of Gross domestic products of 12 European countries
. At first glance, it is shown that France in 2007 was the highest in the chart with the
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in contrast
, all three years
in the
Estonia were the lowest in the graph by almost 3 Correct article usage
apply
percent
.
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per cent
peak
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its peak
by
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at
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, Luxembourg and and
Spain were almost Remove the redundancy
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equally
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Also
, Lithuania and Poland were second lowest by
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in
health
Expenditure. By taking all the country, it is possible to tell its average is 8 Change preposition
of health
percent
.
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per cent
years
, the most dominant period was the year
2012 with 5 countries
shown
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pretty
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a pretty
year
that was at the
rock bottom was the Correct article usage
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year
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than
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