The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in an European country bbetween 1979 and 2004

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consumption

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the consumption

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of Fish,

Chicken

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,

Beef

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, Lamb and

Chicken

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, in European

country

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countries

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from 1979 to 2004.

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, the red meat

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was decreased throughout the years, the

Beef

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fluctuated

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, severe decline over the period,

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eating

Chicken

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showed a significant increase

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trend

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over all other lines,

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to fish which shows no change and steady

grow

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. In detail, around 150 grams of

Chicken

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meat was guzzled in 1979,

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a significant increase until it

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300

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at the end

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of the period,

this

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trend

surpass

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all other meats.

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was

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steadily declined from 1979 to 2004, which was the lowest in the rank. Moving to

eating

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Beef

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and Lamb in 1979 the lines were topmost 230g and 150g respectively,

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the

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line experienced

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a sudden

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drop,

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in 1984 a rapid surge was shown followed by

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a gradual

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decrease until it

reach

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120g.