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the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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 is the time series of the monthly average
price
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change
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 of three materials in 2014. The graph explains the percentage of
price
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change
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 compared with the previous month.
For example
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, the chart shown in February is the percentage of
price
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 compared to January and so on. Three materials explained in the
line
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 chart are copper, nickel, and zinc, which are drawn in a dotted
line
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 with a white button, a straight bold
line
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 with a black button, and a straight light
line
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 with an x-letter button, respectively. In the first four
months
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, copper had positive changes at 1 to 2%. The next two
months
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 they had a decreased
price
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 at below minus 1% and
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 went up again in the next semester with a 0.5 to 2%
price
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change
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. In the meantime, nickel and zinc had a relatively similar pattern. From January to May, they had an increased monthly
change
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 of prices and went down from June to October. After that, they got another increase in average prices two
months
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 ahead. In summary, nickel and zinc only had two different trends, happening in February and December.
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 copper seemed to have a more constant increase in its monthly average
price
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 in ten
months
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, accumulatively, in 2014.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, change, line, months with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "explains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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