WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - describe what you enjoyed about the course -say how much cooking you've done since the course - suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing a letter to express my

gratitudes

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about

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the cookery course that

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had

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enrolled

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for

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the

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6 months. Yet,

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was enjoying

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being

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in

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cookery

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because

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had learnt about

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basic cooking skills.

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also

learned how to make mother sauces, which is the key to

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a chef.

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was so fortunate to join your

cutenaly

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culinary

school

.

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had learnt a lot of theory and skills for becoming a chef.

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learned how to

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a knife and how to identify

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food poisons.

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am asking if your

school

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it

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could

be offer

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offer

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more baking/

pastery

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pastry

. The reason why

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raise

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idea? because it could help other people who are interested

to study

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baking and it could

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benefit

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your

school

by

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seeing

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more people

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enroll

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. I appreciate your time and effort

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me

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develop my skills as a chef. yours' faithfully, Tokateti Totoki