the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.

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The map illustrates how a city called Norbition has planned to develop in the future.

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, what stands out from the picture is that there will be significant developments in terms of residential areas and recreational facilities. At present, there is a river to the north of the city and above it, farmland is situated. In the centre of the town, there is a road in the shape of a circle and it has two branches, one of which runs to the east of the site. Another one leads to the south of the city and they are surrounded by a number of factories. In the future, from the centre, new roads will be constructed, one of which will pass on the river. Meanwhile, factories are planned to be knocked down in the future and replaced with several houses and shops and a medical centre as well.

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, a school and a playground will be erected to the east of the area.

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned development
existing facilities
proposed changes
infrastructure
public spaces
sustainable development
green spaces
pollution control
local community
job creation
amenities
property values
displacement
traffic congestion
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the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site.

Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extend do you agree or disagree

With the growing number of populations in cities. Many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this a negative or positive development?

In today's world many peoplel own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, an increasing number of people compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems do this cause? What are the possible solutions for this?

The Best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?