The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The given maps show the
village
of Ryemouth
transformation between 1995 and today. Change noun form
Ryemouth's
In
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Overall
overall
, prior to the oldest one, it can be seen that there were
a huge space for Change the verb form
was
tree
on the Fix the agreement mistake
trees
noth-east
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northeast
side
of the village
. Furthermore
, there was also
a farmland that was used by local people for the way they lived. In recent
Add an article
the recent
map
, both Fix the agreement mistake
maps
forest
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the forest
park
and farmland have been transformed Fix the agreement mistake
parks
to
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into
the
sports area which provides Correct article usage
a
golf
area and tennis Correct article usage
a golf
court
.
From the current condition, we can see that there Fix the agreement mistake
courts
are
a significant rise Change the verb form
is
on
the number of people who live Change preposition
in
at
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in
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
the number of housing has been added both on the left and right side
of the road
at the north-west side
of the Ryemouth village
. The housing road
also
has been enlarged towards the west side
of the village
.
There are several changes that applied in the south side
of the village
. The only object that remains the same is only
the cafe. The hotel has been developed by adding Rephrase
apply
car
park just beside the building. The prior fishing port has been Correct article usage
a car
demolised
to Correct your spelling
demolished
an
usual coast Change the article
a
side
. Fish
market which was on the left Add an article
The fish
A fish
side
of the road
has been replaced by four apartment towers. Meanwhile, shop
that used to be on the right Add an article
a shop
the shop
side
of the road
, is
already taken place by some restaurants to Verb problem
has
fulfill
the Change the spelling
fulfil
need
of Fix the agreement mistake
needs
current
society which Correct article usage
the current
much
higher compared to what it was in 1995.Add a missing verb
is much
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