The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025.
The bar chart illustrates the information
of
the main Change preposition
on
exports
in Southland in 2000 and 20.. with prediction
through 2025. The Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
exports
are categorized in
three different types, International tourism, Dairy products, and Meat products.
Change preposition
into
Initially
, in 2000, International tourism commenced at the highest point, with slightly over 8 billion
. Thereafter
, it showed a minimal increase in 20.., with approximately 9 billion
, before predicted to reach its pinnacle, with the maximum number of the given period, 10 billion
, in 2025.
The second-highest exports
, Dairy products, started with around 7 billion
. The figure sharply increased to 10 billion
in 20.. . However
, in 2025, the number will dropped
to nearly 9.5 Change the verb form
drop
billion
, as forecasted.
On the other hand
, Meat started with the lowest number, only 6 billion
. Then
,in 20.., it witnessed a small decline,
and was projected to decrease to 5 Remove the comma
apply
billion
, in 2025.
Overall
, it is apparent that international tourism accounted for the largest numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
exporting
Replace the word
exports
while
the least exports
product is meat.Wrong verb form
exported
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