The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The maps illustrate how Ryemouth
village
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changed from 1995 until the present moment.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the primary changes in Reymouth
village
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are the addition of residential areas (housings and apartments) and the development of
sport
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facilities (golf courses and tennis courts). In 1995, there was a forest park on the east of the map and a farmland above it. By the side of the road that crosses from southeast to northwest, there
was
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a housing area with several isolated houses below it. On the bottom of the
village
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, there was a floating fishing port with a fish market by the side of the sea. In the present moment,
it is clear that
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the farmland is converted to a golf course merged with a tennis court which was previously a forest park. The fishing port is demolished and the fishing market is replaced by several apartment buildings. The shop, which was
initially
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placed in front of the fish market, is transformed into a block of restaurants. The hotel and cafe remain at the same place in the southeast area of the
village
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with a new car park built next to the hotel. The addition of several houses
are
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is
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witnessed in existing residential areas.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that".
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • village
  • Ryemouth
  • 1995
  • present
  • houses
  • small school
  • residential areas
  • amenities
  • population
  • increased
  • growth
  • expansion
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