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The bar graph illustrates information about household
internet
usage in cities & villages in terms of percentage in a country, which is situated in Europe from 1999 to 2004.
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Overall
, people who live in towns browse more Linking Words
internet
than the rural citizens. In both Use synonyms
the
cases amount of users increased gradually.
City dwellers used almost 15% Correct article usage
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internet
in 1999. Use synonyms
This
ratio of users tended to increase in the following years and reached almost 30%. Next two years Linking Words
this
increased with the same ratio, which became almost 40% and 50% in 2001 and 2002 respectively. After that Linking Words
steadily
increased rate Correct article usage
a steadily
wasfollowed
and Correct your spelling
was followed
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finally
the percentage was almost 55%, which was the most for Add a comma
finally,
this
category.
People who live in Linking Words
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accessed below 5% in 1999, which was the least number Correct your spelling
countrysides
users
. Change preposition
of users
This
rate of using the Linking Words
internet
grew with the progress of time, varying from almost 5% to 30%. Use synonyms
Finally
, it reached almost 35% in 2004.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 6 times.
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